The Alien, Immanent You

    I found this assignment to be extremely difficult.  How could I, as a white, young male, possibly “hack” into a work created by a black woman without altering and undermining the integrity of her own work with my own limited viewpoint and understanding? In order to show my inability, or the inability of any white person, to fully understand and respect Claudia Rankine’s work, I had alienated the word “you.”  For… Read More

Citizen Hack: pages 114-118

The first time I was introduced to the basic principles of genetics and variation (in high school biology), I remember being caught up in the seemingly infinite possible combinations of genes that produced particular results: the visible expression of a trait (phenotype), and the actual combination of alleles for a trait (genotype). I was struck by this because it dawned on me that this scientifically proved just how silly and irrational racism… Read More

Citizen Hack: Pages 3-8

I was given the very first section of Citizen to use, which – in terms of an annotated “hack” for future audiences – presented me with a virtual blank slate to work with. While there was a reference to Rankine’s childhood school in New York and a painting by Michael David Murphy titled “Jim Crow Road,” there weren’t many other major references to annotate or explain, so I was given a massive… Read More

Citizen Hack: Page 163 to Back Cover

This final section includes a list of “Images,” “Works Referenced,” acknowledgements, and a quick author bio. In sum, it cites the contemporary sources (monetary, digital, and otherwise) that helped Rankine create this work. As this is a Word-Art class, I decided to focus on her 4-page inventory of the images that she peppers throughout the text. I was essentially charged with annotating Rankine’s annotations. The contemporary cultural references had been factually explained to… Read More

Citizen Hack: pg 15-20

  In hacking these particular pages, it was important to me to not take too much attention away from the personal anecdotes. I didn’t want to write over them, but I did want to pick out individual words and phrases that might otherwise be overlooked and not deeply considered for their intentions and associations.  To that end, my annotations mostly took the form of definitions that broaden the meaning of the text… Read More

The Poetics of Jena Six

I understand that this post is longer than what is required for this assignment. However, I was not satisfied with my original explanation and reflection. I’m sorry if the final outcome seems excessive.  Book hacks are often used to bridge the divide between a literary work and their audience. Traditional hacksaim to facilitate the reader’s entry into a work in order to fully comprehend its meaning. Claudia Rankine’s Citizen: An American Lyric… Read More

Citizen Hack p 21-30

For my hack of Rankine’s Citizen I wanted to combine an academic mode of annotation (footnotes) with a more subjective and interpretive visual style. A consistent edit I made was placing constricting arrows pointing onto and crowding the text of the names of all black people mentioned and arrows pointing outward from the names of all the white people mentioned. I did this to symbolize the ever present “white space” and how it marginalizes… Read More

Language is everything belated

In Citizen, Rankine found power in language. But too often I found the root to racism and micro-aggressions were created through language. My passage in particular focused on the misuse of language in a hurtful and permanent way. I wanted to annotate specific cultural moments that might slip through the cracks of time, like the Rutgers Basketball Team; however, I also wanted to stress the afterlife of words misspoken, or the words… Read More

Citizen Hackitizen Hack

  This hack was not what I expected to do. I had wanted to create a small booklet called “collected memories you forgot to collect” going off of what Majo said in class about our expectation that all texts be immediately accessible to us. I liked the fact that I had to go look up the event and the people and some terms because what I got was more full than a… Read More

Citizen Hack

This section of “Citizen” (pages 130-135) is a story that explores black and white space in terms of micro aggression. She describes a woman standing and the discomfort of the man sitting. One line that struck me was, “you keep trying to fill it except the space belongs to the body of the man next to you, not to you” (131). The idea of ownership of a public space is interesting and… Read More